Originally Posted by dcuny
Love the singer/songwriter vibe.

Others have mentioned that the chorus could use a bit more punch. I agree, but also think the feel matches the resignation of the lyrics.

I thought this lyric felt a bit out off:

   I got plenty to answer for/It’s all on my dime

I think you're saying that you've had to pay for your mistakes, but it feels like it could be stronger with something less oblique, like:

   I got plenty to answer for/You'll have to get in line

Anyway, nice song. smile

David, I appreciate your comment but the lyric works for me.


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