Originally Posted by Guitarhacker
I listened again on my good buds. Nice thump but.... where's the bass? The bottom end? It can stand to come up significantly.
Herb, THANKS for the feedback on the bottom end. Will certainly give it another listen. Which earbuds do you use? I've not had any luck with buds providing a neutral studio listening environment. But I've not gone high end yet either.

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
A good point that also makes me think about my own songs.
I don't want to derail this thread, so I opened my own here in the Songwriting forum.
Feel free to add your own thoughts!

B.D., I responded to your other post on this topic. It's an interesting area without a single right answer, I think.


Originally Posted by floyd jane
Nice Pop write. (the prosody of the songs shows a good understanding of the genre)
Nice Vocals. Really well recorded. I think they ought to have more reverb and a touch of delay. That would be typical for the style/genre.
Nice BGVs, too.

SOLID tracks. Those Drums sound Great.
I very much enjoyed this.
fj

fj, geez, I had to Google "prosody". Hey, prosody is a good thing! So glad you enjoyed the tune. THANKS for the feedback!

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