Geez, I don't think the lyrics are "unpleasant" at all. Sure they're dark and subject to even darker interpretation. But I think they're quite nice.

The overall feel of the song reminds me of The Velvet Underground, which is meant to be a high compliment. Very artsy without be cutesy at all.

Guitars and bass sound great. The vocals sit nicely in the mix and don't need to come up at all.

Is that the Mellotron at the end? If not, I missed it.

Great job getting a BiaB vocal harmony to sound musical. That's not easy (for me)!

So, I don't know if the long incubation period was worth it to you, but I really enjoyed the listen.


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
StudioCat DAW dual screen
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)