Originally Posted by Janice & Bud
It’s a song well worth the wait and the time and effort to “get things right.”
Terry was a perfect fit for the vocal as his little nuances bring focus to the strong lyric.
The below verse, especially, is powerful.
“A dark sun rising
Feint heart reviving
The pain of life
Akin to death
It casts a shadow
Straight as an arrow
Marks the target and
Steals, from it, breath”
Greg and Gerry sound great. We agree with you about the BiaB harmonies.
Ray, all your instrumental tracks and the mix are standout.
We enjoyed the backstory on how all of the big production came about.
The ending was a perfect punctuation mark for that last breath stolen.
Wow!
J&B
Thank you Janice & Bud,
Terry is a good fit, perhaps not a perfect one but his laid back style and soft presentation certainly tells the story well. He's rather clearer in the new remix in my 1st reply post.

Cheers
rayc
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