Hi, Joe.

My first thought was of the picture: two betta fish in the same tank? That won't end well.

But you explicitly mention they're females in the lyrics, so... wink

This has a of Barnes and Barnes sound - yeah, I'm thinking of "Fish Heads" here - in the best sense.

In some ways, the song is bit of a mess with the overlapping vocals.

On the other hand... well, it's a glorious mess that fits the song.

Sorry, I had too much fun listening to this to give useful feedback. laugh

Edit: My daughter had a listen, and gives it two thumbs up. "This is the kind of stuff you should be writing." she told me. grin

Last edited by dcuny; 11/07/23 06:11 PM. Reason: My daughter heartily aopproves.

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Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?