Originally Posted by David Snyder
I thought this was well done.

A pleasant arrangement and pleasing sounds.

On the mix, there COULD have been (not to say there needed to be) more dynamics in the volumes, instrumental tones, and mix (when stuff comes in and out )

With instrumentals, you have nothing but instruments to add dynamic rise and fall so you really have to work those faders in my humble opinion.

Just a thought.

Nicely done.
Thanks David.
You're right about instrumentals relying on instruments. There are no clever/sad/thought-provoking lyrics or a beautiful human voice to add dynamic rise and fall.
It's just the music. But it is rewarding trying to produce a piece of music that listeners can appreciate.
Cheers,
Mike
Originally Posted by Rustyspoon#
Mike,
Cool mood and instrument changes throughout the composition. Like listening to several different tunes that have s omething in common., which is not a bad thing by any means. Interesting listen and thank you for sharing.
Misha.
Misha, your comment, "like listening to several different tunes that have something in common", is just what I was aiming for - a 'fragile piece' of music reflecting the 'fragile peace' of a war-torn region.
Thanks for listening,
Mike
Originally Posted by Ezekiel's Storm
Piano editing works well. Pleasant, easy-going melody in the first part. I like the changes. A bit of a medieval feel in the middle. This was just a plain cool and interesting piece.
Thanks for taking the the time to listen and comment.
Mike

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