Let's fall to pieces, together..... That kept going through my head.....

Man I really like this. That acoustic guitar is luscious.
On the flip side, the bass was extremely lite.

Great job. I like the song.

You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.