Ah, a sad "I'm without you on Christmas". Are you sure you're not a country singer? smile

Like the blues, it's hard to go wrong with this sort of song, and you do a good job here.

While I liked the modulations, some of the chord changes feel out of place. I suspect I'll always gripe about them, and you'll continue to use them forever. grin

With the cell phone fitting in one's pocket, this line doesn't have the punch it once had:

   ...I still wait by the phone ...

Anyway, I enjoyed the song - nicely done.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?