Hi, Shigeki.
Weird, I know I wrote a comment yesterday. Maybe I didn't press "Post Reply"...

I listened to both versions.
The BiaB version works well. It's a bit more cut back and intimate. I found Hatsune Miku's unvoiced consonants unpleasant, but it's not your fault - I don't think Vocaloid
ever did a good job with them. I can't help mentioning that SynthesizerV sounds much better, but Miku is there as a guide for the singer, and for
that, she's perfect. So there's no need to change what works.
Nice melody, and good lyric as well.
As good as the BiaB version is, the live version is
so much better. Kiana sounds great, and the string writing is a real treat to listen to.
I love it!
