Hi Bob,

Another gem from you! What an enticing lyric. Ron already pointed out the line that caught my attention.

The tremolo baritone guitar is a perfect fit for everything else. Also, the ooohhhs, although subtle are a great addition.

You have a way with words few other people do. yep - another bright, sparkly gem.

Looking forward to more from that old notebook.

Alan


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