Tom,
I don't mind if there is some preaching in a song, as long as the song itself is good.
And yours is very good.
Your vocals are strong, but sensitive too. I like that!

I also think it is important that children can laugh.
But I know someone who doesn't remember laughing as a child. I thought that was very bad...

Hans


Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130