James, I won't pretend to fully follow the arc of your overall plan, but I really enjoyed this song! The composition is lovely, and the key modulations add interest but sound effortless (as they should). Your vocals are very nice as always, but they sound a tad more muffled than I like. (Could just be my high frequency hearing loss, too) Best of luck with your very ambitious project, and THANKS for sharing!


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
StudioCat DAW dual screen
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)