Hi Vic, Brain, Dan (Firesong), Tom and David,

Well, that was a lot of compliments I got from all of you, despite the lack of Christmas spirit in the song.
Thank you for listening and giving all that nice comment.

Originally Posted by vicarn
I like the tone of this Hans.
The lead solo sounds great too.
A lot of work here.
Vic

Hello Vic, yes indeed. I miscalculated the amount of work, but I am pleased with the result. And -the way I read your post- you too. That maked my day, or... still does!

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
I think it's a pretty good song.
The style changes are a bit unusual, but you make them work quite well and it keeps my attention.
I like your lyrics and the way you deliver them.

Hi Brain, I became a bit curious by how you meant the word 'unusual' here. But on the other hand it were a bit unusual styles to combine. But it worked out fine.
And that's probably exactly what you wanted me to know. Thanks!

Originally Posted by firesong
Hans...you did a stellar job mixing different styles and their components...I too really liked the solo...lyrically very dark and I suppose ending with a question was the only way to go...maybe a verse or chorus about how to make a difference would brighten the mood? unless the answer is we can't make a difference?

Hi Dan, it was exactly that, what you said in your question. The song is sad, almost leaves the singer with no hope about humanity, but still has a little hope it can become better. That was the intention of that last line in the chorusses. So, nomore examples of bad things, just that question. So I hope it will not end in a way like your last 5 words. Thanks for your thoughts!

Originally Posted by tommyad
Hans, I really like what you’ve done here. Clearly a lot of work has gone into this project. Your use of all the real tracks is excellent as well as your vocals. The lyrics are well written and the overall production is high quality. Good one, Tom

Hello Tom, I can only say; thanks a lot for those very nice words. They give me a very warm feeling!

Originally Posted by dcuny
Good write - not every song should be happy, especially when the topic isn't.

Hello David, a funny remark, but so true. I said to myself, I have to keep that sentence of yours in mind. I'm sure I can use it somewhere...

Have a very nice day, everyone!
Hans

Hans Berkhout
(Birchwood)
https://soundcloud.com/user-296497130