This is really cool but I have a suggestion.
The part that I like the most about this is the lyrics because they're really funny and very well done.
I think you should consider raising the tempo, I think at least doubling it, and using some kind of Hip Hop style, and being really aggressive in the vocals and you might have a hit on your hands.
Just a thought.
Thanks David for your pleasant comment

Glad you liked the lyrics.
You gave very interesting and wild suggestion, I appreciate it very much. I tried it, but so far it didn't sound good, probably because BIAB is lacking in 6/8 styles. Instead of Hip Hop style, jazz seemed to work better, but that is not enough aggressive music, I guess.
Janne