PBX adds a touch of commercial Pop! A very cool sound. (the first single from the LP, I suspect)

Nice jangly guitars. Very cool Bass.
Drums could peak out a bit more.

I agree the slightly-off vocal is charming in the verse.
Not so much in the chorus. Having the chorus be very-much-in-tune would offer a nice contrast. (I very much Like the chorus!)

I like it.

fj