Originally Posted by DC Ron
Like the dynamics of the arrangement, and the arpeggiator is very cool. The 2nd vocaloid sounds fine, but I don't care for the more robotic sounding 1st one. (Sorry, I can't tell their names) Now about those lyrics...There are plenty of genres where the f-word can just slide right in. In a pretty ballad though, the use of the f-word makes the song sound like an adult joke, or a parody. This may be your intent, I don't know. But at a minimum, the f-word will polarize your audience, for better or worse. Anyway, enjoyed the listen, and all the best on this musical journey!
Thanks Ron for listening and your feedback.

The song is neither a joke nor a parody, but I guess I have to accept that the use of the F-word is a bigger problem for some than the message of the song itself.
Glad you enjoyed it anyway smile

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