Hi James,

I liked it! I agree with Michee. This song was a good fit for you. I've got to say, I really like the prosody of this song. Your arrangement has captured this well. One small observance was that I noticed that at around 1:39, the backing suddenly softened in anticipation of the vocal. I found myself wondering if it was possible to move this volume reduction a second later so that it came across more as a blending between vocal and backing. Other than that, though. I enjoyed it

All the best,
Noel


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