Originally Posted by dcuny
Sounds great!

I'll echo what floyd jane noted - the word "Presidential" has connotations that don't match the sunny disposition of the lyric.

   Stop warming the bench and you'll
   Unlock your potential
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That aside - great vocal, positive lyric, upbeat production! laugh
Hi David.

It's excellent to see you smile I totally understand what you mean with "Presidential." As I said to floyd, here in Australia while the impact of what happens in the USA is still felt, we're a bit distanced from the political happenings. We have a prime minister and not a president as the leader of our country. Since we were originally a British colony and Australia has never fully separated from Britain, the ultimate "man at the top" of Australia's political system is King Charles. "President" doesn't have so many connotations surround it down here.

By the way, I love that "bench and you'll"/potential rhyme! I'm very impressed. They're the type of rhymes that I rarely come across. I think my brain's processing is a bit too linear to think of them.

Thanks for the visit and all the best,
--Noel


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