Hi, Hans.

Nice idea, and well executed. There are a number of phrases that sound a bit "off" in English, but they work fine.

My only comment is really about the end - it doesn't quite fit for me. The line in the verse:

   If you see me, you must change it

implies there's time, but it then jumps right to:

   So I think you got it now
   I've lost,
   I've lost

I understand the point, but I'd expected something along the lines of "Well, I guess this must be what people want paradise to be." wink

Nice work on the video, but it's a bit too literal for my taste. But that's just me. smile

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?