My dear David, how could I be offended by my own
mistakes ? No, I thank you for correcting me on
my lyrics , there is however something we up
here call writer´s freedom which means that
the writer has some liberties as how to
express himself !

According to certain wells "lust" could be used in the meaning
of "desire" which was what I aimed for here
The "lid" I was referring to is of course "eyelids"

I beg your pardon for my obvious mistakes
but then again how far can I go when it comes
to using the writer´s freedom ?

I hope for a most Merry Juletide and Happy New Year
for you and your nearest !😍

Cheers
Dani

Last edited by dani48; 12/26/23 11:29 AM.