B.D.,
cool experiment, nice composition and mix. If you don't pay attention to the message / lyrics goes well. Clear mix.
Now the critique smile
The message and vocals resonate in strange way (the angelic vocals). I can sense robo. Meaning most of true punk girl tunes I've heard with similar message (the ones I liked), were more convincing / sincere while this sounds more like pop production.

In any case, I applaud your creativity and thank you for sharing.

Misha.