I have listened to this multiple times - my thoughts are below. I recognise the time, effort and talent you have put into this. Sorry if you feel any of the negative comments are harsh or unjustified. Thanks a lot for posting the song.
Date: 28/12/2023
System: Mackie Studio monitors
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Duration 3 45
Overall impression
There’s a lot I like in this enterprising and thematically ambitious composition
Song (musical structure, melody, lyric, …)
Well done for the chord structure – simple and effective.
This line needs a re-think “Smash lives like hammers boulders”
I particularly like Solaria’s melody lines.
Instrumentation
Good use of contrasts in the music (piano section)
Vocals
Are the singers virtual – I’m guessing they are. The tone is fine but the word/line stress is frequently unnatural. This is a shame as it distracts from the clever lyric.
Mix / Production
All the instruments are well chosen and really nicely combined in the mix
What I really liked
The synth line that kicks in at 50:00 is indeed superb
I really like the “power-pop” groove you set up on this one
What could be improved
Ending is sub optimal, a touch anti-climactic.
Some lines sound ‘unnatural’
Maybe 30 s too long, but I say that about everything
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Having read some of the other comments I find the objections to the lyrics unfounded. Plenty of mainstream artists have f*ck / f*cked and f*cking in their lyrics and it doesn't seem to do them any harm (other than they need to produce a 'clean' version for radio play.

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