David, love it! Man, I wish I could play keys just like that. Nicely done. Passionate lyric and vocals really work well on this very strong tune. Don't see the BGVs in the credits, but like a lot of those passages a lot, particularly for the build to the end. On a couple of lines (like "One place that lives..." in the final chorus) there's a bit of BGV dissonance that might be worth cleaning up. But dissonance is not always a bad thing, particularly in a song about life's adventure. Heaven knows there's enough dissonance in the world today...

Great song!!


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
ASUS I9-12900K DAW, 32 GB RAM
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)