David, love it! Man, I wish I could play keys just like that. Nicely done. Passionate lyric and vocals really work well on this very strong tune. Don't see the BGVs in the credits, but like a lot of those passages a lot, particularly for the build to the end. On a couple of lines (like "One place that lives..." in the final chorus) there's a bit of BGV dissonance that might be worth cleaning up. But dissonance is not always a bad thing, particularly in a song about life's adventure. Heaven knows there's enough dissonance in the world today...

Great song!!


DC Ron
BiaB Audiophile
Presonus Studio One
StudioCat DAW dual screen
Presonus Faderport 16
Too many guitars (is that a thing?)