That's a pretty decent song.

Keep working and practicing on the piano. Playing a piano is a skill that is always handy to a songwriter.
I use the piano quite a bit when I am working on songs even if it doesn't end up in my songs.
It's also, in my opinion, the best instrument to use to understand music theory.

I enjoyed the song.

You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.