Originally Posted by BobLMusic
Hey Marty,

Fine tune, with a nice beat - it had me moving my feet!

I liked the lyrics - just letting them pour out of your subconscious is the best way to go. Maybe you'll figure out what it means later on. But letting your listeners find their own meaning in them is also good.

Dave's guitar sounded great, too!

Keep'em coming!
Hey, Bob. Thanks. Glad you liked it --and found (the possibilty of) meaning in it. You're right, songs where the lyrics can mean different things to different people at different times become more relatable.

Originally Posted by NigelSpiers
Hi Marty,

This is good stuff - only suggestion is vocals louder and less reverb.

Best Regards
Nigel
Thanks, Nigel. Yep. You pegged me correctly as someone who really doesn't like the sound of his voice. So my tendencies are always like, "The vocal is too loud in the mix," or "Maybe this knob will help." I appreciate your comment and will try to be more dedicated to the song --or maybe get a better vocalist. wink

Originally Posted by MarioD
Marty, as I tried to decipher your lyrics word got out about what I was doing and men in white lab coats came, put me in the funny jacket where I couldn't move my arms, and put me in a rubber room mad grin

I liked that bass and your vocal.
Dave always adds the icing to the cake.
You two are the dynamic duo.

I liked your song!
Yeah, I know those guys, Mario, and I studied Houdini films and learned to dislocate my shoulder to get out. Thanks for being there with me, brother.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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