Brian,

First off, really like the feel and sound you’ve given this with the percussion . . . really fits the song. Nice vocal . . . would have liked to read the lyrics, though they are pretty clear within the song. Excellent BGV harmonies—Beatles like. Actually, a lot of this reminds me of a Beatles tune, something Lennon might do. Cool strings as well. Like this one a lot! Excellent work!

Deej