Originally Posted by rayc
GREAT writing.
Fabulous distillation in the lyric.
The placement of the vocal in the mix is spot on. The outro is ace & the Celeste is perfect.
My only nit is with the right side rhythm guitar...but it's also about the best BIAB has to offer of that ilk so given the tools at hand:
Fabulous.

Thanks ray. Very much appreciated. This kinda stuff almost writes itself...
I don't really know anything about Metal guitars and what they should sound like.

Originally Posted by critter
Excellent job, really liked it. This type of genre is my type of music, i don't post any because nobody really listens. Keep up the great work, missed your new songs for a while. Thanks for being you.

Thanks, critter. Nice to see you pop in. Been a long time....

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Floyd, I never expected your (country) voice to fit this genre ... but it certainly does.
In fact, your clean voice positively enhances the contrast between the raw guitars and the dark content of your lyrics.
Excellent choice of instruments, and ending a loud guitar song with a Celeste is right up my alley.
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Thanks, Brian.
To tell you the truth, I did not expect my vocals to fit this either. Adding the near-constant 3rd-below helped fill it out some and give it a Bit more genre-fitting-help... I then added a copy of the vocal with a heavily distorted Nectar preset, underneath and that helped some more...