Elliot, very inventive, and a nice listen!

You've definitely got a feel for the showtune style, as this song nails it. Really liked your voices, especially when there was a hint of breathiness. Just adds that nice human touch. A couple of the held notes had too-perfect vibrato to my ears, but that could be my imagination.

Arrangement and mix were great overall. The vocals settled into the mix nicely in the last third, but in the middle I thought they were a bit too far forward.

The work you and others are doing in this area is truly trailblazing, and I look on in wonderment.

ATB, Ron

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Too many guitars (is that a thing?)