Originally Posted by Alexander Paul
Got some Leonard Cohen vibes even though your voice is very different and the song contains a lot of electric guitar!
Thanks very much, Alexander. I like the Cohen thought.

Originally Posted by MarioD
Marty and Dave, you have produced another masterpiece.
Great vocal and lyrics.
Super groove.
I also got a Leonard Cohen vibe from the lyrics.
FWIW - I also thought that Dave's guitar during the leads were a tad to loud.
Super bass line!
Thanks, Mario. Much appreciated. Subconsciously I seem to use Dave to drown me out. smile

Originally Posted by David Snyder
Sounds great Marty! I like the way you're starting to put those chord progressions in there, that's really neat.

You sure do know how to stay on top of the blues.

Great job all around fellas. I can always count on you for some excellent blues material!
Thanks, David! I started putting the chords with the words cuz it made it easier when I added bass or figured harmony. Glad you find it helpful.

Originally Posted by vicarn
You always sound like you enjoy what you're doing Marty.
Everything sounds fine on this (vocal, lyrics and BIAB). Dave's guitar is great but to my ears could be brought down a little closer to the other tracks in volume.

Vic
Thanks, Vic. That loud guitar is a result of me adding Dave's track, loving it so much, then mixing it so it stands front and center, Sadly, before posting I forgot to get it back to blending better. It has been fixed, but...


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