Lyrics are superb. as is the singing and the composition.

A couple of minor suggestions:
I know I’ve got a reputation as a ryhme policeman but
today/away/ways + break (hmm !!)

I realise its supposed to be slow but I feel this one could be just a little too slow.

..but overall this is a thoroughly impressive piece.

Even a great ending. What a pro you are, Russ!

Marc