Hi, Hans.

Nice work! Good write, well sung, nice arrangement. I like the changes, like when the banjo enters in.

The only thing that I might change is the lyric:

I roughly know how far they are away

only because it's really mangled the grammar. Something like this would probably parse a bit better:

Although they are frighteningly far, far away

But part of the charm of the lyric is that it is mangled. wink

Your description says "there's a feeling that something new and exciting might be on the way for him." But from the lyrics I see, it seems like he's looking back ("I long for you", "I'm still alone") and trying to convince his old love ("if you could see me now") that he's changed.

Anyway, a really enjoyable listen, with Dave fitting in nicely. smile

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?