Jim, what a great song! I loved the lyrics, the backing tracks and your voice was nice and strong. Super job on that.

To really really really nitpick I didn’t like the guitar solo (what would you expect from a guitarist?). If you’re going to use midi then add some vibrato via the mod wheel on the sustained notes. Hopefully your sound source will allow you to do this. Or ask for a guitarist to play the lead line. I’ll bet every guitarist on this forum would jump at the chance to play on this. I know I would.


I got myself a seniors' GPS. Not only does it tell me how to get to my destination , it tells me why I wanted to go there.

64 bit Win 10 Pro, the latest BiaB/RB, Roland Octa-Capture audio interface, a ton of software/hardware