Hi, Vic.
Originally Posted by vicarn
Wonderful work, David.
The lyrics and voices are great and the sax is a good addition.
Thanks!

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A bridge is just to create contrast to what comes before and after but I expect you already know that.
I use usually it if I need to separate two similar parts, i.e. the last two choruses.
I'm not sure you need it here as the last chorus is lyrically different but it may work better if you silence one or two of the instruments in it to create variance.
You're absolutely right.

In my defense, I did lower the energy level of the bridge, but it could have more contrast.

When I'd finished the first draft of the lyrics (but before working out the second verse), I realized I basically had two different choruses. What I probably should have done was rewrite the lyrics into the second verse, But... I liked it, even if it didn't fit in. So I stuck it on the end anyway. wink

But yes - it's not the best structural solution.

I appreciate your feedback and careful listening! laugh


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My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?