Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Your song is a bit strange lyrically, but I like it, maybe because I'm not yet the target group for your lyrics smile

As others have already said, the lyrics are a bit hectic in places.
I'll pass on some good advice Scott (Ezekiel's Storm) gave me after I posted my first or second song here: try to say the same but with less words. Best (lyrical) advice ever!

Thanks B.D. for your kind comment smile I can live with that you are not yet the target group laugh

Well, good advice by Scott, although it wouldn't help if I take it literally: I would use less words but longer ones with more syllables wink

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