Hi, Brain.

Nice song! I was going to make a couple comments, but I see you beat me to them...

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But before you ask: No, I have no idea what exactly I'm protesting against, but I'm pretty sure it's important.
Yep. Perhaps a bit too generic, but then, people are always saying that songs should be universal, and what could be more universal than a song that applies to everything? wink

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For a change, I tried a wild mix of end rhymes and internal rhymes
I think it kinda works.
At least I'd like to think so.
Yep, the work well enough. The inner rhymes were fun.

You've got some sort of distortion on the vocal that didn't work for me. Not a big deal.

The title doesn't seem to match the song. The POV of the title addresses people, telling them they need to fight for their rights, while the POV of the song is the narrator addressing the towe-dwelling bloodsucking vampire freaks. Not a big deal at all.

I like the contrast between the verse and chorus - it's always good to have a song make the sound different.

Anyway, good job.

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?