Hi, Scott and Robert.
I listened to both. Since the vocals are
so much more clear on the first mix, I call that a huge win there.
Plus, the video on the first is more interesting than on the second.

Much wider stereo field, nice separation between instruments (especially the bass).
I'm still clueless what the lyrics are about, but that's par for the course with Robert's lyrics. Some songs are meant to be felt, not understood.
Good job with retooling it!
