Hi, James.

As usual, a song by you that very much has your voice. And as floyd jane says, and emotional write.

My ears are still a bit congested, but it seems like you've boosted the high end. That helps with clarity, but makes some of the vocals a bit harsh, especially the "s" sound. Then again, it could just be my ears...

I love this lyric, hoping against hope:

   Perhaps your pen has run out of ink...

Nice work.


-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?