Originally Posted by rayc
Lots of good elements and the language is fine if it expresses how you feel...I know lots of folk who can't express emotion without profanity.
My problems is that the lyrics, music and voices don't combine to express in a way that works for me.
Thanks for listening and your feedback, Ray.
It's a shame that the song as it is now doesn't work for you, but I'm glad you told me anyway [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]
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