Originally Posted by Rustyspoon#
B.D.,
cool experiment, nice composition and mix. If you don't pay attention to the message / lyrics goes well. Clear mix.
Now the critique smile
The message and vocals resonate in strange way (the angelic vocals). I can sense robo. Meaning most of true punk girl tunes I've heard with similar message (the ones I liked), were more convincing / sincere while this sounds more like pop production.

In any case, I applaud your creativity and thank you for sharing.

Misha.
Thanks, Misha, for listening and your good feedback [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]

I totally agree with what you say, but at the moment it's not really possible to get a dirty, gritty, raspy, nasty voice out of Synthesizer V.
Natalie (the one who sings in the lower register) is the most usable for that and is even with tons of distortion still way too clean, so I always have to settle for pop-punk.
The other singer (Solaria) is intentionally clean to create contrast.