Originally Posted by mglinert
I have listened to this multiple times - my thoughts are below. I recognise the time, effort and talent you have put into this. Sorry if you feel any of the negative comments are harsh or unjustified. Thanks a lot for posting the song.
Thank you very much for listening and for your really detailed feedback, Marc.
Highly appreciated!
I have no problem at all with negative comments, because I learn from them and that's why I'm here.

I know that "smash lives like hammers boulders" is incomplete, to put it nicely.
I really liked the image, and correcting it would completely destroy the flow I wanted.
But I agree, and Marty has of course pointed this out too.

Thanks again for taking the time for this really detailed feedback smile[Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]