NEVER CALL YOU MINE - Jazz Cocktail Lounge Version

https://www.reverbnation.com/kaynemusic/song/34362335-never-call-you-mine-jazz

Continuing my quest for writing Standards that anyone could cover, this one is a classic smooth jazz ballad.
Many have given me valuable feedback (most of all my wife) that this song should be slower, and more jazzy than the first version I posted.

I went for a Cocktail Lounge feel, a simple jazz trio, late at night in a small smokey night club in New York City.

Which version do you think works best for this song?

Here's the Dance version for reference.
https://www.reverbnation.com/kaynemusic/song/34360856-never-call-you-mine-dance

100% BIAB Real Tracks
****** Song Summary *************
Title: NEVER CALL YOU MINE
File:NEVER CALL YOU MINE.SGU
Key=G , Tempo 110, Length (m:s)=3:22
No intro. 89 bar chorus, from bar 1 to bar 89. Repeat x1 chorus
Melody has 1663 notes, Melody harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Soloist track has 621 notes, Soloist harmony is < no harmony >(0)
Song is saved with Volume, Pan, Reverb, Chorus, Bank0,
Style is _WISTFUL.STY (Wistful Modern Jazz Latin Trio)

RealTracks in style: 2955:Bass, Acoustic, ModernJazzLatinBalladNeil Ev 110
RealTracks in style: 920:Piano, Acoustic, Rhythm Rumba Ev 110
RealTracks in song: ~1249:Piano, Acoustic, Soloist JazzMike Sw 110
RealTracks in song: 3338:Synth, Analog, Soloist FunkJeff Ev16 110
RealTracks in song: 404:Sax, Tenor, HipHop Rock Sw 100
RealDrums in Song:BossaBrushes: a: Sidestick Brushes b: Sidestick, Ride

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You rattled my imagination
cant think straight any more
You know you are all I hoped you would be
Now I see you are so much more

You have a certain inclination
and a different frame of mind
So confident and care free
I could never call you mine

Seems I've known you now for years gone by
Though we only met tonight
we danced we laughed and said goodbye
I could never call you mine

Im feeling new sensations Something I cant define
All within a moment or two
That count the passage of time

You caused a brief infatuation
cant get you off my mind
you are more than a passing fancy
but I could never call you mine

Elliott Kayne
elliottkayne@gmail.com
https://www.reverbnation.com/kaynemusic
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