Hi, floyd jane.
The timing differences in the vocals as they harmonize is Impressive and adds to the realism.
Heh. I started "fixing" some of the staggered bits last night, and came to my senses.
But I
did go back and make sure most of the ending
/s/ landed in the same place. I've can still my choir director complaining that we sounded like a bunch of hissing snakes at the end of phrases.

Terrific melody. The chorus is especially nice.
Thanks!

I was worried it would be a bit threadbare. Glad that's not the case.
The Backing is cohesive. Pleasant Pop.
Good mix.
Can't ask for more than that from a pop song!
Thanks for your kind words - I appreciate the positive comments.