Hi Mike,
This is a really catchy song! I loved it. Now I can't get it out of my head!!!! (That's probably a good sign, though.) You've got a sensational voice, the harmony is terrific, and your guitar playing is top-notch. The song is produced incredibly well, too. Apart from the pronunciation thing that a couple of the guys have mentioned, there's nothing I can fault. To be honest, I really liked hearing those couple of instances of your accent.
Because I'm in Australia, I often use the Merriam-Webster dictionary to help me get some American pronunciations correct. It's an online dictionary with the words vocalized. It's been very, very useful.
http://www.merriam-webster.com/Good luck with your songwriting, Mike. You've got a magnificent sound happening.
Noel