Mike, it sounds very good. Nice and clean. All instruments sound perfect.

As far as the word 'other.' If you hadn't pointed it out I wouldn't have paid that much attention. If you bring attention to anything then people start focusing on that.I don't think many others would have paid that much attention either. Word pronunciation is your personality. Have you noticed how Americans pronounce words? Listen to a few songs. You sound fine. My singing pronunciation is a little better than my talking voice. If you talked to me you'd think I just fell off a chicken truck.

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