Originally Posted by musician17
WONDERFUL!!! Hahahahahaha. Made me really, really smile and chuckle out loud, throughout. I love your sense of humor, together with such a professional presentation. The spoken section is top notch, every word is perfectly intoned. The sung sections are wonderful; you have a light kind of voice, perfect for this kind of song, perfect to make one smile whilst also seeing the serious side of things. The snoring, at the end, took me totally by surprise and had me in hoots of laughter. BRAVO. You make people so happy with your music, no matter whether serious or on the lighter side.

The video is simply brilliant. That poor overturned otter or seal, or whatever you call that one ... aww smile And cleaning up the mess with surgical gloves - fab smile Is that you, on the video, in the spoken section? Wonderful - especially the unfocused moments, haha ... brilliant smile

WELL DONE. Thank you ever so much for sharing smile
Thanks so much, James. What a wonderful review. Yeah, that seal seemed perfect for the waking up part. Yeah, that's me in the vid. Our graddaughter Charely is also in there saying, "Close that." After she recorded her part we ad libbed a cave story with super reverb on the mic.

Originally Posted by vicarn
Hi Marty.
These lyrics are well writ and fun and I love the 3/4 time.

Vic
Thanks, Vic. That waltz time is intended to give it a wobbly leg feel.

Originally Posted by Torrey Bliss
Marty

I never thought I'd see/hear it, but the bluesman has become a Country outlaw! Don' t worry you pulled it off just fine!Your piano playing was just fine to my ears and the de-tuned sound fit quite alright!
The snoring at the end was unexpected but had me smiling!
You are a talented fellow!
Take care, TB
Ha, thanks, Torrey. If I had a horse, it would be Lucky.

Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
Marty, if you hadn't mentioned that you play the piano, I would have guessed this was a RealTrack.
Pretty good work, Pianoman.

Wonderful lyrics. The speaking part is excellent.
Love it!
Thanks, Brain. Got my first "big break" playing Burt Bacharach's piano in Sceptor records. The only thing that break brought was breaking the record for flops.

Enjoy whatever happens!
marty

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