Hi Andy,

This is a good tune and a catchy backing rhythm too. Also the guitar is very well played.

It is definitely worthy of some further development - a few suggestions:

1. Maybe a chorus or middle 8 - I may have missed these.
2. Changing the lead to another acoustic instrument (e.g. Piano or Sax) to give it a bit more light and shade.
3. What about dropping out most of the backing instruments and just playing the guitar in the middle of the song.
4. How about a couple of stops to make everybody sit up and take notice.

I would love to hear a remix.

Best Regards
Nigel


Nigel Spiers
Christchurch, New Zealand
info@nzacoustics.com