Originally Posted by jannesan
Touching lyric does great justice to Alan's original instrumental. The whole song has now even stronger emotion, especially with Tom's soulful voice. It's great about these collaborations that 1+1 equals more than 2.

Janne
Janne, thanks for nice comments. It was a quick and easy process to come up with lyrics because Alan’s instrumental really touched me.
Originally Posted by floyd jane
Topline writing is harder than it looks. And being good at it is even harder...
This is a Superb example.

"I still hear you whisper softly in my ear together we’ll grow old
Then you’d sing me some old love song about heart mind body and soul
There was a night we had a fight not knowing what would lie ahead
We found out that day the things that you say can never be unsaid"

How it is done.
Stunning lyric.

"Memories drift by like storm clouds in the sky
I see us standing in the rain
I still feel your breath your arms around my neck
What I wouldn’t give to see you once again
You know I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t dying
—— to tell you the truth
Baby—- sometimes I still think of you"

It doesn't let up.
(and the inner rhymes are icing)

Alan's tracks are some of the best around.

This is an amazing collaboration.

A big WOW to you both.

fj
Thanks for the stellar review. As I mentioned Alan’s wonderful work made it a pleasure to be a part of.