Hi, Steve.

Originally Posted by Bass Thumper
I felt a bit unmoored and drifting when listening and had difficulty searching for a structural scaffold that I could anchor to, although the vocals were hi-energy.
Well, the verse and pre-chorus all share the same progression, so there's a lot of sameness there. And it doesn't have a strong rhyme scheme, which doesn't help.

Also, most of the chords are inversions of some sort, which doesn't give the harmony as much stability as it might.

I've gone back and re-done the bass line, but I doubt that fixed the structural problems you're talking about.

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A lack of glue is one way to put it, another is a lack of identifiable repetition that can anchor the listener.
I'll see what I can do to make the next song more clearly constructed. smile

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That said, I can see a lot of work went into this production, skills that I certainly don't have. And I found the mix to be well balanced .
Thanks, I'll take the good with the bad. It's all a learning experience.

I appreciate the feedback, good and bad. Not every song works for everyone.

-- David Cuny
My virtual singer development blog

Vocal control, you say. Never heard of it. Is that some kind of ProTools thing?