This is a great song and you did a good job on the voice. Especially considering it's a "first time" effort.

There's a few places throughout that gives it away that it's not a human singer.... but with experience, you will hear that and fix it.

Good overall job.

Note: I like Hayden and have considered hiring him as well.


You can find my music at:
www.herbhartley.com
Add nothing that adds nothing to the music.
You can make excuses or you can make progress but not both.

The magic you are looking for is in the work you are avoiding.