Originally Posted by B.D.Thomas
First things first: I think the song is very, very well done, the arrangement (with some unusual instruments) works well, the mix is pretty good and Janice is, as always, the highlight of the song (actually, she's the highlight of _any_ song, but we all know that by now).
But I'm not sure I really get the song. You create a constant tension that you don't resolve and that makes the listener uneasy, and I think (if I understand it correctly) that the vocals are trying to do the same thing.
If that's your intention, then I'd say you've done brilliantly and it's a GREAT song [Linked Image - Only viewable when logged in]
Kinda unsatisfying, though.
If not, I'm lost and need your help to figure it out confused
PS: good to see you back!
Thanks B.D.,
Yes, unreleased tension, though the solo comes close, was the aim.
The narrative is in two parts: the verses are the unexpressed or unfulfilled desires of an older person. Three snapshots of regret/loss/unaddressed need. The choruses address the way long term relationships amongst those who are elder are often shaped by habit and a more dominant personality. No release there.

Cheers
rayc
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